Writing simple

Self and Buddy Evaluation:

	I need to use new words. My writing has many extra things that are not needed. Take them out! My writing needs to show that I understand the topic.
	my partner did put some punctuation in his sentences. Also, it needs some more powerful word s so people wanted to read his story and also he has not used Tiic correctly. Aso, he should make paragraph so.

For writing, Me and Jonathan used the LS2 wrting Rubric to help us write and were we are at on the Punctuation, Vocab, Organisation, Sentencce structure, structure and language and Ideas.